As another example, researchers working on automated essay revision , where the goal is to revise, for instance, a thesis statement or an argument in an essay to make it stronger, would benefit from having the thesis strength scores we annotate.
the first step in deciding how to revise a thesis statement to make it stronger is to understand why it is weak, and the aforementioned attributes that we propose to annotate will provide insights into what makes a thesis statement weak and subsequently how to revise it.